Kindliness: A Link

I am looking for feedback on my short piece, Kindliness. At Miss Eldredge's suggestion, I am pursuing publishing it somehow, somewhere. To do that, though, I need it to be trimmed, polished, and buffed. I do not have abundant time to do that now, but to do it right, I would enjoy critical, revisionary feedback. Just click on the word and you can access the GoogleDocs copy. Please provide comments here. And both of my roommates have read it and enjoyed it, so don't worry about me freaking them out. I hope you find it enjoyable.